I need to keep better notes...
Nov. 12th, 2006 09:26 pmI found a handwritten page of dialog mixed in with fic stuff.
Problem is that I don't remember writing at least a third of it. Much less where I was planning to use it. It's pretty good though, I'll have to find a new place for it. I must have scribbled it at 3 or 4 in the morning, judging that some of it borders on completely illegible.
and to share one of my favorites (and more tame of the bunch):
"Pardon my slovenly ways, but I'm much too comfortable, and you make a *fabulous* pillow."
I'm starting to wonder if I was planning to put this one at the end, after the showdown with the bad guy.... ::ponder::
Problem is that I don't remember writing at least a third of it. Much less where I was planning to use it. It's pretty good though, I'll have to find a new place for it. I must have scribbled it at 3 or 4 in the morning, judging that some of it borders on completely illegible.
and to share one of my favorites (and more tame of the bunch):
"Pardon my slovenly ways, but I'm much too comfortable, and you make a *fabulous* pillow."
I'm starting to wonder if I was planning to put this one at the end, after the showdown with the bad guy.... ::ponder::
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Date: 2006-11-13 02:43 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2006-11-13 03:04 am (UTC)BTW, I think you'll enjoy this little bit as much as I do, now that I reworked it:
"Once a day is enough I think. You’re a freakin' animal, Yuy. Savage beast even. I don't think my ass has ever been so sore."
"I'll just have to ravage you again, and just prove that you really like it."
"Ravage away, man. I swear I'll resist though. You won't take this ass without a fight."
It makes me giggle inappropriately.
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Date: 2006-11-13 08:34 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2006-11-13 10:27 pm (UTC)The more I write this, the more pervy Duo gets, but he's also playing the smart-ass... so I guess that works. ::shrugs::