ficcage! "Touching Patterns" (YnM)
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kikoteiTitle: Touching Patterns
Rating: PG-13, maybe leaning close to R
Pairing: Tsuzuki/Hisoka
Date Completed: April 2, 2005
Warnings: Touching!! Boys touching boys in publicly inappropriate ways. ::grins::
Notes: This was highly inspired by rereading volume 4 of the manga, in particular Tsuzuki's round in the archery competition. Puuuuurrrr.
Also this has not been beta'd by another person. I did go through and beta as best I could. This is also my first piece of completed fiction writing in a *long* time.
I'm right where I want to be. Sure, later I'll probably opt to bitch and whine about how embarrassing this is, but for now, I think I'll stay.
I run my hands slowly up Tsuzuki's arms; fingertips carefully tracing the contours of each muscle as they quiver with tension and barely restrained power. My fingers dance over each line, following them as they touch and intersect, the patterns graceful in a way only nature can achieve. His shoulders stand in far greater relief than his arms, the muscles bunched and knotted from the effort of holding back, from keeping his body distanced from my own. My hands finally rest as they reach his neck, fingers lacing and locking at the nape, tangling in his hair.
"Hisoka..."
"Don't even think about leaving, Tsuzuki."
Tugging gently, noiselessly asking Tsuzuki to stay, to come closer. He capitulates, slowly and carefully dropping to his elbows, still trying to keep some distance. I can feel only the barest touch of his emotions; so tightly reined he is keeping himself.
"I want to see those eyes again. I want that look directed at me, those predatory, possessive eyes."
"... I don't think..."
Upping the ante, I shift my legs, bracketing his hips with my knees and digging my bare feet into his calves. Using my feet and an appropriate amount of wriggling, I urge Tsuzuki's body lower, finally bringing us into contact. The warmth and solid *weight* nearly distracting me from the moment I was waiting for, a break in his concentration, his emotions leaking out in now recognizable patterns. I find a considerable amount of lust, tinged with a touch of self-disgust. Ahh, now I understand.
"Don't even start to think that, Tsuzuki. I want you here, like this, with me."
A smile tugs at the corners of his lips, drawing my eyes from his for a moment. That smile, the one I've only seen him give to me. A special one, just meant for his partner.
"I want to be here, with you."
~End~
Rating: PG-13, maybe leaning close to R
Pairing: Tsuzuki/Hisoka
Date Completed: April 2, 2005
Warnings: Touching!! Boys touching boys in publicly inappropriate ways. ::grins::
Notes: This was highly inspired by rereading volume 4 of the manga, in particular Tsuzuki's round in the archery competition. Puuuuurrrr.
Also this has not been beta'd by another person. I did go through and beta as best I could. This is also my first piece of completed fiction writing in a *long* time.
I'm right where I want to be. Sure, later I'll probably opt to bitch and whine about how embarrassing this is, but for now, I think I'll stay.
I run my hands slowly up Tsuzuki's arms; fingertips carefully tracing the contours of each muscle as they quiver with tension and barely restrained power. My fingers dance over each line, following them as they touch and intersect, the patterns graceful in a way only nature can achieve. His shoulders stand in far greater relief than his arms, the muscles bunched and knotted from the effort of holding back, from keeping his body distanced from my own. My hands finally rest as they reach his neck, fingers lacing and locking at the nape, tangling in his hair.
"Hisoka..."
"Don't even think about leaving, Tsuzuki."
Tugging gently, noiselessly asking Tsuzuki to stay, to come closer. He capitulates, slowly and carefully dropping to his elbows, still trying to keep some distance. I can feel only the barest touch of his emotions; so tightly reined he is keeping himself.
"I want to see those eyes again. I want that look directed at me, those predatory, possessive eyes."
"... I don't think..."
Upping the ante, I shift my legs, bracketing his hips with my knees and digging my bare feet into his calves. Using my feet and an appropriate amount of wriggling, I urge Tsuzuki's body lower, finally bringing us into contact. The warmth and solid *weight* nearly distracting me from the moment I was waiting for, a break in his concentration, his emotions leaking out in now recognizable patterns. I find a considerable amount of lust, tinged with a touch of self-disgust. Ahh, now I understand.
"Don't even start to think that, Tsuzuki. I want you here, like this, with me."
A smile tugs at the corners of his lips, drawing my eyes from his for a moment. That smile, the one I've only seen him give to me. A special one, just meant for his partner.
"I want to be here, with you."
~End~
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Date: 2005-04-03 06:58 pm (UTC)I enjoyed this a lot. I love Hisoka and Tsuzuki, and I really do see Hisoka as the one who would have to persuade Tsuzuki that it's okay for them to be involved. It works for me because I see Tsuzuki being hesitant with anyone, but especially with Hisoka, given how he became a shinigami.
I love partner/best friend slash, too, so this appeals to me for that reason. ^_^
It was very nicely written, and it makes me want to read more. I like how you portray them and their relationship. ♥
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Date: 2005-04-04 06:16 pm (UTC)And I'm glad you liked it. I was a little concerned about how Hisoka came out. He sounded pushier than normal a couple of times, and a little more aggressive than most people write him.
And I agree on Tsuzuki's hesitance. He's not one to get really close to people, he'll get close, but only let them in just so far. And with Hisoka's past I thought that he would be especially concerned about starting anything or even influencing Hisoka with his emotions.
Thanks again. ::hugs::
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Date: 2005-04-04 08:42 pm (UTC)::leaves basketful of baby plot bunnies on Amy-chan's doorstep and runs off::
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Date: 2005-04-05 01:29 am (UTC)*teehee*
No sorry, Had to. *giggles* It's cute... needs to be longer, really dude, where's the smut?! Sweetness. Even hile HIsoka is being pissy, he's being sweet *laugh* I love it.
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Date: 2005-04-05 02:34 am (UTC)Glad you enjoyed it though.
And here's to hoping my cats eat the plot bunnies. I can't handle anymore. ::giggle::
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Date: 2005-04-05 02:38 am (UTC)I'm working myself back up to writing. It's been so very very long since I've done any fiction type writing. It's been a couple of years now, I've been writing school papers for so long. Once I get my writing skills back up I'll work towards smutting.
I was worried that Hisoka would come out sounding to aggressive. I know his normally very aggressive, but it's more of a competative aggression. ::shrugs::
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Date: 2005-04-05 05:14 am (UTC)